Hmm
I only watched this because I recently beat Disgaea and I loved the game to death. Well one thing you defenitly need to do is get some Girl to do Etna, this can be easily be done by searching NG BBS, Clock Crew BBS, and LegendaryFrog's Forum (I hear there are lots there). The character portraits had white crap around them which was not pleasing to the eyes. Hopefully you take this suggestions into consideration for episode 2. By the way, how did you get those backgrounds and sprites?
Good job on the animation dood.
-GoldCrow