Well done.
I love Jhonen Vasquez, and that's one of my favorite JtHM strips. The art was not a perfect translation, but it was close. I didn't really care for your choice of music in his scene, because this was one of Nny's more "adorable" moments, so i lowered your score a bit for that as well. Overall, though, you did great. Keep it up and they'll only get better.