Very good..
I am a huge JTHM fan, as well as Squee, invader zim and the rest of his works. I think you did a great job recreating the comic strip, though i do have a few suggestiongs. The comic strip is know a lot for its blood and gore, so u think that hsould be one of your main focuz points, making it as gruesome as it can be. The second, which goes to all comic books is the voice acting. Its jtu hard to find the right voice because everyone hears a different voice in their head narrarating. I know myself for instince pictured him having a more calm voice that was slightlyhappy sounding and bright and sunny which made him all the more spookier. I don't expect you to understand hte last sentence much. So I guess you can use the voice for Johnny if you wish, but perhaps to have the option to have johnny's speech written and not voiced could imporove it for others. Other than that, great job on the artwork. You really captured the JV style. Keep it up!