Reviews for FOS Tournament - Ep. 5

[juxpy]

I hate sprites! But this is definately an excepton

Sorry, but going in before watching this movie, I was ready to vote 0, simply becuase I have the tendency to hate all Sprite movies. But then I thought since you are a quality flash artist, to give you a fair chance! and i must say! I was wrong, this is actually a quality flash! You put forth quite some effort! This is one of the only sprite flashes I can bear to watch! You and chronoplug series are the only good ones out there! I am now going to watch your other series, and hopefully review them! I also like your sound, it was a great choice, and was put nicely together, all in all this was very well done! Keep up the awesome work, dont stop making sprites since your actually one of the best makers I have ever seen! I give you a three out of five on the portal voting and a seven out of ten on the overall review voting!!!! Keep up the awesome work, I love your episode as it looks frmo this one, I will go watch them now, and if before basketball I have time, I will try and review them! Best of luck on your sixth episode and any future ones you may try and do! Keep up the awesome work! I am proud of Newgrounds to be fortunate enough to house such a flash! :)

-Jamie

[Mattr]

A little annoying!

Not too bad... the main thing I really don't like is how you've gotta click the top every time someone talks! - I was just sat there at first waiting :p

Graphics could be improved, but it's not too bad

Eshbaal responds:

The graphics were what I could do.. not all of the sheets were too animateable, so it did kind of limit everything. I never claimed to be awesome at this anyway.

And as for the clicking... if I didn't do that, everyone would complain about it either going too fast or slow. You don't die from using that there ability you learn in school, y'know.

[scr4ppy]

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Damn, mind the filesize. Try to lower the quality of the music.

Eshbaal responds:

Chris is the sound editor. I know nothing about sound editing.

[Mystic-Ninja]

Had its moments...

The choice of music is good, as well is the sprite altering. But the story line is kinda bad.. It would be better with voices, or just if you didn't have to click to box every time.

Eshbaal responds:

I know about the storyline, and I am ashamed. Originally, there wasn't supposed to be much of a story, really... and I ended up kinda just throwing it in. It's bad, but it's there... and I can't just remove it. Sorry.

And I won't bother replying to the textbox thing.

[Trixiaoyu]

I gave this submission a vote of "3"

It was too long and got boring to read in some places!
The fight scenes weren that great either... make them more fast paced!
Use 30FPS!!