To much loading time
You realy need to optimise your flash that you do, that was only about 30 seconds worth of clip and it took up over 3mb! That should take up a max of 1.5mb. Otherwise, not to bad, I think that its good for people my age to animate. Keep up the good work, oh and, I think that people over 22 can make flash lol, david firths (doki) work is the best ever, hes the one that inspired me to make flash :)