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Reviews for "MONKAY #1 "The Begining""

gradients = evil.

stay away from them, and dont use them as backgrounds! ahh! haha.
well, not a bat little episode i thought. you have your bad guy, and you have your weaker group of 'heros' that will eventually kill him... not a very original plot, but it can be pulled off. just improve the graphics a little bit.
6/10
(THE THUMB: UP)

ZIM106 responds:

ha thx i'll try and remember that

listen

shave your dads hat hair

ZIM106 responds:

U had to ahve liked the movie a little BIT!!!!!!!!!!! Right???

Could Be Better

I like the idea, but the execution needs work. There is far too much exposition from the characters and not enough storyline. Not that this idea requires storyline, but static bearheads spouting out speech bubbles isn't going to win you friends. What you need to do, then, is to storyboard the next episode to coherently tell the story. The action was neat, but there needed to be more of it. Otherwise, a neat attempt, but more effort could truly make this neater.

ZIM106 responds:

Well i really haven't got into the stroy yet in this episode... just introduced the characters... well most of them, but thanks for the good advice... it might be helpful in the near future.

improve a little

I think you should improve a little on this one.the music was good but I wish there was voiceovers.

Music

Wrong.

That's the most mislabelled song on the internet. It's not Aphex Twin. It's Outside - To Forgive But Not Forget. Don't trust what Limewire tells you, it's wrong 50% of the time.