I agree on the text, it goes just slighty too fast.. I could barely keep up. Its still a good story though. I can't wait for part 3.
Reviews for "The Talking Silence, Ep.2"
Good
I thought it was a good flash and an interesting idea. I do want to say though that the words went by kind of fast, needs to be just a little bit slower.
GoldenTaco responds:
Yeah, so I've been told. I'll take that into mind in the next one. Thank you for thew review!
Violent, abrupt, fast, emotional
The second episode maintains the feel of the first, and continues the theme further. The speed in which the text changes is perfect - you must read it so fast that you haven't had time to fully proccess any of it... then, silence.
The sorrow of a child emotionally unequipped to accept his mothers death, is beautiful (although tragic and horrid as well). Please continue and explain the plot behind this.
good.
I didnt completly understand it.. but thats not nessarily a bad thing. good job on this. keep making suff... practise makes perfect!
one little thing, though -- the text boxes went a little fast.
great job overall
Alright. Could've been better.
The little "poems," as I like to call them, are very amusing. I like the whole loneliness of this character, who just sits there in an empty shelter, thinking about silence and other disturbing thoughts that enter his head. Only suggestion I have is to let the text stay there a bit longer; even longer than it needs to stay. This way it might give it a more creepy feeling, rather than just staying there for a few seconds. Maybe making it fade out would be pretty good.
I also like how these are short and straight to the point. Keep it up. I see a great future for this series.