good.
I didnt completly understand it.. but thats not nessarily a bad thing. good job on this. keep making suff... practise makes perfect!
one little thing, though -- the text boxes went a little fast.
great job overall
Reviews for "The Talking Silence, Ep.2"
pretty good.
ok, THIS time round i dont see any resemblence to Salad Fingers, hahah. pretty good i thought. quite nice, detailed graphics with some alright animation - even though there wasnt a lot. a little is better than nothing - and good music.
the dialogue sort of resembled that of the Broken Saints movies, but still it was original. nice work.
6/10
(THE THUMB: UP)
Seek mental help, and make more flash.
This movie was fucked, yet tasteful. Keep it up, and try not to kill yourself before you finish the next movie.
GoldenTaco responds:
I'll try!
Alright. Could've been better.
The little "poems," as I like to call them, are very amusing. I like the whole loneliness of this character, who just sits there in an empty shelter, thinking about silence and other disturbing thoughts that enter his head. Only suggestion I have is to let the text stay there a bit longer; even longer than it needs to stay. This way it might give it a more creepy feeling, rather than just staying there for a few seconds. Maybe making it fade out would be pretty good.
I also like how these are short and straight to the point. Keep it up. I see a great future for this series.
Good
I thought it was a good flash and an interesting idea. I do want to say though that the words went by kind of fast, needs to be just a little bit slower.
GoldenTaco responds:
Yeah, so I've been told. I'll take that into mind in the next one. Thank you for thew review!