poor rabbits
it wasn't that bad, but it definitly still needs alot of work. Add more color next time its too plain
Reviews for "Bunny Suicides"
yevvie responds:
Yeah, there's some stuff I'd like to fix up, but I'll get around to it. As for the color... I was going for a 'minimalist' look, but I'll probably do another one in the future, maybe with more color, detail, etc.
Pretty good, commendable, i guess...
This was ok, the graphics were pretty good, I like how it was just black and white, everything stood out and such, there was not much blood and such, it was very skippy. However, I thoroughly enjoy the sound choice on this! It fits perfectly, and it has perfect timing as the flash progresses! Ways you can improve: Coloring, it was just black and white, that would be ok for a short time, not this long however: wasnt very well animated, wasnt as gory as i would of liked. Good things was that it was very humerous I laughed out loud at some parts and such. Keep up this work, just do a few run throughs and brush up before you submit again! Best of luck on your future flashes!!
-Jamie
yevvie responds:
Thanks a lot, I really do appreciate constructive criticism! I will definetely be more thorough in the next one.
hee hee hee
very good...
shame about the blatant plageurism.
ho hum.
yevvie responds:
Its not plagiarism. First of all, I credited Andy Riley for the original idea. Second of all, the actual suicide methods are my own ideas, they don't appear in the book, as it says in my autho's comments. But I'm glad you liked it! :)
ok
its not all that funny but some parts where
hmmmmmmmmm...
Not too bad, but the book was better
good effort tho
yevvie responds:
Thanks. Maybe the next one will do the book justice? Hehe... we'll see :)