Experimentation is the key to unraveling to new experiences...
So try out different styles and poses, I plan to put some art here in NG but I want it to be good (like yours).
Getting creative is really of one of the hard parts..
So I'm going to give you 4 stars cos' I don't want to discourage you but also I want to see you improve.
That's why I fav'd you ;D
Reviews for "Her Realm of Nothing"
DragonPunch responds:
Thank you for your kindness!
I dont' know why so many people are voting it down...
People are getting really picky about art these days, criticizing fucking everything!
Everyone has to start somewhere and nobody can reach the level of "Perfect" but everyone is trying to get there. In the meantime, try to enjoy some work that people spend a lot of time doing.
Keep at it DragonPunch! Don't let them keep you down, they're just being immature. Your stuff is looking pretty good in my opinion and there's not reason to vote this 0-1 stars.
I voted 4 instead of 5 because there are a few adjustments that could have been done.
For example, never use black to color with, but rather a really dark shade of gray. Only use black for the lines that define the shape of the character.
Because it's hard to see any detail on the wings and the outlines should pop.
It seems like Kinsei01 had a very bad day there.
(Keep in mind I am not a pro, I just like drawing myself and I find small flaws here and there)
Work a little bit on the figure of the face, and the joints, these are actually the parts that really grab the eye.
Just my personal opinion, good luck!
It's alright lol. The two major flaws I noticed off-hand was that the face needs a little work(which will solve itself with your eventual practice), and that her right wing(viewer's left) has no view proportion- the Character is in a 3/4s position but the the wings are as if they were in a front view. I believe this is most likely cause you simply copy-pasted. You shouldn't do that unless it isn't obvious.
As for the face- I'll leave out my critique about the skill level since that will only be solved with time. What I will say though is that the character's expression is rather lifeless- blankly staring ahead. You should have at least tried to put some emotion on her face- like a smug smile or a toothy grin.
P.s.I gave the guy below me a nickname. He is Cranky McGrumplestien.
DragonPunch responds:
Well, I tried, but thanks for your feedback, and I agree. It's unfortunate that it works that way for me, but I agree. I just wish Kinsei wasn't such a bitch.
Well at least your trying different poses. Your lighting is all over the place, which might be excusable if she was surrounded by Lava... maybe. But you already clarified that was blood. So lighting is very poor. Anatomy is starting to get the tiniest bit better but not by enough. Her feet are too tiny. Her belly button is off. That pose while a good try, looks stiff and painful and awfully contorted. Her shoulder looks dislocated. The hand looks a smidge weird. Her neck is too long. The expression is dull and boring, much like the background. The wings look nice, but I honestly thought they were apart of the "throne" till I realized you were going for a fallen angel type deal. I think you have the potential to do much much better, but you insist on holding yourself back.
DragonPunch responds:
Thanks for your feedback, and while you do make good points, I assure you, I already have those things covered.