Experimentation is the key to unraveling to new experiences...
So try out different styles and poses, I plan to put some art here in NG but I want it to be good (like yours).
Getting creative is really of one of the hard parts..
So I'm going to give you 4 stars cos' I don't want to discourage you but also I want to see you improve.
That's why I fav'd you ;D
Reviews for "Her Realm of Nothing"
DragonPunch responds:
Thank you for your kindness!
Her pose much like your other submissions is a posed shot facing the viewer which is getting repetitive and is sort of showing lack of creativity. It all begins with gestures, movement adds both vitality and intrigue. I'm talking about REAL movements like: kicks, swan dives, pirouettes, and cartwheels. Try something new.
As for the piece being of discussion on the Art forum, you decided once again to disregard advice and never bothered to even ATTEMPT to step out of you comfort zone. The shading is muddy and the background is trying to support the image but in reality ruins it even further. A background complements the subject, never makes the subject.
It's alright lol. The two major flaws I noticed off-hand was that the face needs a little work(which will solve itself with your eventual practice), and that her right wing(viewer's left) has no view proportion- the Character is in a 3/4s position but the the wings are as if they were in a front view. I believe this is most likely cause you simply copy-pasted. You shouldn't do that unless it isn't obvious.
As for the face- I'll leave out my critique about the skill level since that will only be solved with time. What I will say though is that the character's expression is rather lifeless- blankly staring ahead. You should have at least tried to put some emotion on her face- like a smug smile or a toothy grin.
P.s.I gave the guy below me a nickname. He is Cranky McGrumplestien.
DragonPunch responds:
Well, I tried, but thanks for your feedback, and I agree. It's unfortunate that it works that way for me, but I agree. I just wish Kinsei wasn't such a bitch.
So let me get this straight; I take the tiem to painstakingly write out review for you. Something that would have helped your art immensely. Then you take it down and then have the balls to re post that price with negligible changes claiming that now its done.
But to REITERATE!
your lighting STILL isn't fixed.
Your color is bleeding worse than a 13 year old girl on her first period
and even worse your bleeding is happening in all of the wrong damn places (like her EYE!)
and frankly if I were the girl in that picture I rather through myself into the lave pit than sit like that for even an instant.
So props. you provoked a strong emotion with your art. like this one for example:
*insert deformed baby fetus drawing here*
So congratulations you've lost yet ANOTHER person who could have helped you. Ta ta
DragonPunch responds:
That's actually a pool of blood, and uh...Fallen Angels get stronger with blood so...You makin' a death wish or somethin'? All joking aside, thanks for your feedback, even if it was full of cursing and immature ranting.