camon man
I could be better but camon man stop with the mario
Reviews for "VG Stars:Outtakes Ep.1"
MEh.
This looked really cool, but. You can put your talent into better use.
=O you should draw people combusting into flames..... I don't know. =< but for somre reason, I just didn't like this.
o.o But you do have some good talent there.
2\6 ( mushrooms make you see goombas. )
alpha2 responds:
Hey, thanks for teh compliment. ^_^ I am gald you weren't as brutally critical as the other reviewers! I'll certainly try harder on the new flash I am working on.
Turd of the week! Nice job
Your third flash, well improve on this first or scrap it. The movie was slow as hell, especialy when mario jumps up for the mushroom. Second - Dont do mario, we have tons of mario stuff in here (just seach for it!) and it is really easy to do. Just get a rom/emulator hit 'print screen' a couple of times put it into your flash and hey you have turd of the week! See how easy that was?
Shadow Flare's Review
Note: I judge submissions by the standars of today no matter the date it was submitted nor the designer's experience with flash at the time of making the submission.
Graphics: 5 - It was sort of like the game. However, it was much slower and a little sketchy which annoyed the hell out of me...
Style: 1 - One blooper... and it's Mario finding viagra mushrooms.. not really amusing unless you take "magic mushrooms"
Sound: 2 - It was rather annoying music and then it cut off in the middle of the flash. Try getting some music from the original game and make it loop if you have to.
Violence: 0 - Does not apply to this submission.
Interactivity: 0 - Does not apply to this submission
Humor: 0 - Like I said.. Mario finding some viagra mushroom is not funny at all. It's unoriginal and quite lame. Plus one blooper. Try to come up with better ideas and put more bloopers into your flash and perhaps it would be better. Sorry, but this wasn't funny at all.
Overall: 2 - To give fair overall scores, I average the scores that would apply to the flash video. Otherwise my overall would not be quite fair.
Extra Note: You have the potential, I'm sure. Just try to come up with funnier stuff and work on your flash skills and if you make another attempt and bloopers make more. It may take time but you need to make your submissions long enough to catch the interests of the watcher and make the humor lean towards other people's tastes if you want better reviews, scores, and make some "fans" of your work.
You need to take your time.
I thought that this movie could have had more effort put into it. Take as much time as you have to make your flash videos as great as they possibly can be , and refine your drawing skills. It takes alot of time for some people to make flash videos, but that doesn't mean you have to rush through it. Take your time. Also, don't listen to any of these negative reviews. They arn't worth your time.