well
um...its differant.
well
um...its differant.
Nice...
Good job on the flash. I dont think you need to bleep out the swear words, but its funny anyways. Like the fooly cooly reference. Hope to see more.
pretty...
the movie was pretty good, everything was funny and cool its just that the guy had a gay voice lol hahahaha!
hahaha
he poked his eye with a stick! lol i died!
Comments:
I think that the character graphics could be better, especially in close-ups; it's good in medium/far shots, but close up they look rushed.
Humour is pretty good, and I liked the "beep" that you have each time somebody swears. However, you can still hear the swear word during the beep! It's just not as funny that way. I demand authenticity! :P
Overall, I think you have a good thing going here; a character winning a fight through his own inneptness. :)
Godd stuff, good stuff. I gotta copy and paste this in my story board. Thanks for the crituiqes!