Rocked and Sucked =p
Well I liked the way you introduced it, it was funny as hell with the CD and stuff, it's just that it always gets on my nerves when I watch a new series (anime or something) and the main character has this ridiculous ability to do something (fireballs or magic) and they don't explain how or why he can do it. But then it was funny how he couldn't hit the broad side of a barn :). The only other thing it needed was some more music for the fighting. Nothing dramatic, just a bit of a "beat" or something. The other part that was hilarious was when he poked his eye, that was funny cuz the muffled sound of his whining was hilarious. Other than the unexplained powers and the lack of music, it was great. This will probably make it on the front page.