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Reviews for "South of Ground"

i agree...

Life is serious bussiness!

Very good for a first movie.

Definite room for improvement, but an excellent start nonetheless. Your characters were original and well conceptualized. Good facial expressions, good backgrounds, great plot funny and twisted humor. Excellent voice acting.

Now for the weak parts.
You need a better mic. The breathing and breath pops detracted from the great voice acting.
The subtitles. They really weren't needed. In most places they just looked tacked on, in others they were very difficult to read or misspelled. Your voice acting was very good, and as such I had no problem understanding what was being said or what was going on.
While what animation you had was good, there was little of it. Great faces, but there needs to be more character animation in the future.
Lack of music. While your voice acting was great, there were holes in the audio that just felt kind of blank. Even some low music in the background would make the flash as a whole more well-rounded. Sound effects help too. They give the flash the feel of an actual show or narrative as opposed to a bunch of talking and pictures.

Keep it up, I look forward to seeing more work from you. You have great promise.

Watch this if your depressed

Good Job Buddy.

Good Message too.

ok

not bad, a bit strange, but it was ok.

:P

Not bad for a first flash.
And it sends out a strong message.

Keep it up!!