Some great stuff... Ok Lots of awesome stuff.
Great storytelling. The Action pulls you right in. I like the landscapes and most of the characters/robots. My biggest gripe would be with the main characters. I feel like this could be supurb if the two main characters were more memorable. They have a sort of frumpy kids coloring book look. Sorry. I am trying to give constructive crit. I really love everything this has going for it.