Funny, this time with two big F's
This was something that I've been wating more than anything in Newgrounds, ever. And thw waiting was worth it. This least twice as funny as the first one.
I don't have much else to say about this movie, it was so good. Just keep stuff like this coming!
5/5
Wow, thanks! It makes me feel that all the hard work was worth while to hear you say that!
Great Cartoon
This was great - a NG cartoon with a coherent storyline that was amusing and well animated.
It actually kept me interested/amused the entire way through, I was impressed.
Keep up the good work!
Just a suggestion
It all pretty well thought out and the voice acting and music is of high quality too. One thing bothered me alot though.
And that was how you use the drawing tablet brush lines for the backgrounds and characters. This really gave the thing a sloppy look and took away alot from the smooth professional atmosphere. These type of lines work better for a more detailed background (i.e like in foamy or merry melony) than in a cartoony one.
I would suggest either to use the pen tool to make the thickness overall the same or by removing the outlines completely (like you did in a scene inside the castle) and only draw the character outlines with the pen tool. Really, it would look so much better this way.
AloneInTheDark
Hmm, well I disagree. I think the pen tool looks awful, unless being used for some sort of detailed architectural design, which this isn't. All of the most popular flash artists use the brush tool, not the pen. First, there is no weight to the pen so it looks like so stiff and unaesthetic. More importantly though, it takes the drawing out of drawing, in my opinion. With the brush, you just draw what you want, and let it flow out. With the pen you draw, but then have to sit and meticulously tweek and fix the lines using handles and all that jazz. I don't know, I think the beauty of Flash is the way the lines look. (The lines of the brush tool, that is) Interestingly, I didn't even draw any of those backgrounds with a tablet, that's just just the way the brush tool looks, which is more cartoony and fun, rather than detailed and precise.
lol
haha, pretty silly jokes. I liked it!
I want a gummi bear!
Good animation, good voice acting and humorous plot. Good job, and the scroll bar is great. Keep up the good work, and gimme a gummi bear, please?