Great piece of animation
Havent seen anything quite like this, really enjoyed it aswell. Music blended very well and set a nice ambience. Good stuff.
Reviews for "Crayon Bear"
interesting..
This is interesting piece of flash..
A beautiful thing.
I can't belive this was mad eout of pure boredom.
Well, i have alot of good things to say and a few bad things, but non the less -don't get me wrong- an awesome peice.
It started off real slow and there were alot of odd awkward pauses. The only thing keeping me watching was at how good your graphics were. The bear looked really good and i liked your unique style.
I feel you could have taken it further and that it was too predictable. The backround was too bleh for me, you should have made the bear re-create its entire atmosphere or something. I just feel it was lacking in all areas except audio and graphics.
And yes, the audi owas amazing. It was perfect and i loved it. Kudos to Synthetic Spirit. Can i assume an NG user, or?
It was impeccably smooth i will admit. Tranisitoned well and the movement was perfect in everyway. I don't think you could have made it any better.
I wish it wasn't so short and so slow. You could have went anywhere with this. The bear could have re-created everything around him and had a ball, but that wouldn't have went with the music. The music was emotional and you i think you may have failed in fuller portraying the emotion you had in mind. None the less, the bear found his joy, but i think the movie could have had more feel. It just feels incomplete to me.
I gave you a 4 and an 8 which you can see below. As you can see, you were only 0.1 away from a 9, so don't let my 8 discourage you. It was an awesome movie, but i liked it because it had a kind, genlt purpose and because your graphics are unique and pleasing to the eye. I just wished you could have done more with it.
In end, you have obvious talents and it was a great move. It was beautiful.
Good luck to you i nthe future and here is the breakdown:
NG Critic Rating
Introduction: 8.0
Impression: 8.0
Style(Graphics): 9.0
Movement: 9.5
Audio: 8.5
Emotion: 8.2
Originality: 8.0
Focus: 8.0
Personal Enjoyment: 8.2
Overall: 8.4
Rating: 4
K. Myst Williams
Madelief responds:
Thanks very much for this detailed review!
I know there could have been more, but as the description says, it was just a boredom thingy ^_^;
I'm currently doing some stuff with more background and such. Even though it's quite simple, I'm still very happy with how much emotion there is.. even though I only worked with 2 beady eyes and a few simple motions ^_^
Awesome.
I was busy blamming movies when I cam upon this, my first 5 today. Great job.
it was so good!
this movie is really good. so cute, so good, so nice...good movie, man (or woman)!