Good animation
I don't really like stick movies, unless they arent good, this was quite good and the animations were quite good too.
Reviews for "The Black revenge 2"
I am impressed!
So, i began watching it and i thought, 'Great, another stick movie.' I think this all the time because it is hard to live up to the top standards of stick animation and anything less usually is not very entertaining. However, you did entertain me, though, your animation has some obvious flaws - and obvious positive attributes.
The little intro i thought was sleek and cool, but it could have started off with a little bit more tempo. Like a few seconds of last episodes collest fight right before the 'Play' screen came up might be a good idea for this type of animation.
For a stick animation, the graphics were decent. Some of the backrounds could have been better, but then again, i wasn't paying much attention to them anyway with all the fighting.
The movmeent and tranisitoning was impeccable and was so smooth. For smoothness you are up there with some of the great stick animators.
The audio was alright, but i felt wasn't just to some of the scenes.
And it was too short, i got nothing out of storyline. Make sure the next one is nearly, or is, twice as long as this one. Way too little happened for a stick animation. Not that it isn;t hard to make and time consuming i am sure, but it could have unravled much more of the storyline. So in that sense, i was bored.
Overall, you got an 8, which is good from. I am not a fan of stick animation, but you proved your worth. With some practice and a few more episodes you might be making top 50. However, you have to take into consideration some of my points. Such things as intro, audio, storyline, length, and maybe some voices... would help make this a contender. You have alot of work ahead of you, but you have some obvious talents to work off of. Good luck to you.
Please don't take this as harsh critisizm, i am just trying to help suggest ways for you ro improve. I hope you respect me and my sugesstions for that.
NG Critic Rating
Introduction: 8.5
Impression: 8.2
Style(Graphics): 8.5
Movement: 9.5
Audio: 8.5
Violance: 8.5
Originality: 8.2
Storyline: 7.2
Personal Enjoyment: 8.3
Overall: 8.4
Rating: 4
K. Myst Williams
FelleAndersson responds:
All I can say is thank you. I like your way to review and point out my mistakes and telling me how to make it better. So, thank you
sweeeeeeet
That was really good really really good! That was very well constructed! You guys make an awesome team! You are the next adam phillips together... Anyway, great job on this, the graphics were phenomenal i expected crap going in but it turned out awesome! Your loading bar is great, which got me hooked easily. Also your sound is not so bad, its a little fuzzy at first, not that humerous i dont think it was suppose to be that didnt effect your overall...Overall that was a very well constructed flash! Keep up the awesome work! I will look forward to more submissions hopefully you two will still be together!
-Jamie
Oh my fucking god....
That was dam funny man!
It shuould be bigger and the deaths arent 2 cool...
Nice job anyway!
s'alrite
this is a good movie but you should make some cooler deaths and stuff