it wasnt that bad...
i saw much worse movies, it doesnt deserve to be the turd of the week. I tought it was funny.
Reviews for "Where's Wally - Ep1"
That was stupid.... but funny
I have to say it, if you are serious about that movie you are pretty messed up. The reactions of the charchters were so random that it was funny in a wierd way. I cant explain it. You must use magic!
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LMAO! That was funny
That was crappy, so it deserves turd of the week, unlike many of the TOTW where the author didnt try hard, hence the crappy flash.
See, the difference IS that you DID try hard, which makes this an authentic turd. The voices, the animation, everything basically; you get the idea...
Problematic
Problem #1. As the first episode in a series, watching this gave me no desire to view the next few episodes you hopefully won't make.
Problem #2. The voices sounded like some guy talking to his twin brother on a walkie talkie.
Problem #3. The only things that were "animated" were the mouths. Everything else involved fliping the characters.
You said the first one was "graphically retarded"... yeah right, I'm REALLY sure you changed that.
There are alot of other problems that hopefully you have the mental capacity to figure out for yourself.
A Good Start
Though I don't dabble to much in flash myself, You could do a lot more work to make this flash better, the music was poor in the background if there was any, The whole wally and Supper wally stuff is kind of old and not original enough, Try to make it interesting to the veiwer, it had little humor which I can tell based on the first few seconds, that was your goal. The Violence was not needed. Sure Senseless violense is sometimes funny but how you placed it, could have been better. I'm not trying to be mean or anything, but try to get reveiws by family, friends or self before showing it. Try to make a story board and such to make your ideas flow better. I hope this can be usefully for your future as a flash maker. I know that you will be a great flash maker one day.