Sweetness of the Cheese
Besides having a few dialogue errors (at one point mario talks to himself) that was awesome! Little things throw in make all the difference. (oh my god i turned into peach!) But wouldn't mario like majorly feel himself up if that happened? I need to learn to end my reviews 2 sentances earlier.....
good
i found this to be really good the only downfall that i see is that i have to click on EVERY box to make the story keep going.
Ugh..
Man was that boring.
Z_Z
eww
I gave you a 2, i should have given you a zero.. I honestly didnt read any of it, i was expecting a reward, like maybe some action... :p
Anyways, good luck.
LOL
Hey, not bad... i liked it, gj!