NO!
lol that was sooo not creative, where are their legs and arms?and where is the gore? besides the wall of blood.
Reviews for "Hardcore"
D-e-W responds:
Well I'm not a big fan of alot of gore but thanks for reviewing!
Not that good.
The animation style is obviously not yours(madness or possibly rayman) The music fit well I guess considering it was a street fight. But sriously how many street fight with two faveless "badasses" am I going to have to see? How do they make such vivid sound when they lack mouths? sorry, I'm just kind of anal about the most mundane of details. Not much else, could be funnier. 2 fo u
D-e-W responds:
Well, I guess I cant please everyone. Thanks for the advice and the time to review it though!
good start
this is a good beginning to a hella tight flash. put som faces on te dudes w/ some emotions; a real background instead of a grey screen/wall; add more depth on the plot (why were they fighting? personal grudge, beer fight, whatever), that's all i can think of...but good job and keep it up w/ the rayman figures.
D-e-W responds:
Hey thanks. I didn't know alot of people like these kind of charcter builds. And thanks for the advice!
Cool. o.o
That animation was SO neat! I liked that the figures were flat, so when the turned at a 3/4ths angle you couldn't see much of them. XD That was awesome. Anyhow, I think the prologue-ish thing at the end could be improved upon. I got a few chuckles out of itt, but maybe you could embellish Grey Man's unfortunate fate and the drudgery of Red Man's desk job. Hee-hee, tragic stick figure-y things... XD Great work. Truly original animation.
D-e-W responds:
Thats a good idea. I shoulda put more in after the fight. Thanks for the good review!
I got an idea
Why dont you put in some really weird
weapons or something that will catch
everyones eye when they do something
that no one ever thought they could do
as a fighting move... even a kick ass finisher
like a toothpick, french fry, spachula, frying pan,
hair net, pez despencer, ketchup packets,sporks=]
hope i gave you plenty to think about...
D-e-W responds:
Well that does certainly give me alot to think about. Thanks for the ideas!