TOO L ONGGGG
GREAT SCRIPT., BUT ENTIRELY TOO LONG., CONDENSE SOME OF THE MATERIAL DOWN A BIT AND PUT MORE EMPHASIS ON YOUR MAIN ROLE LEADERS AND GET TO THE PLOT QUICKER.., DID THAT MAKE SENSE CAUSE IT DIDNT TO ME LOL
Reviews for "Broken Saints CH 8 ACT 1"
Good, but room for improvement.
This is all very well done, with character development, and an interesting plot. Unfortunately, it has a very slow pace and never really hooks the viewer as well as the author obviously could have done. Overall, it deserves a solid "well done."
WOW!
thats all i can say! wow!!!
Nice!
I cant wait to see the rest of this series