Reviews for Mario in Action

[ChuckDaKnife]

Here are some pointers.

You have to improve the anatomy, specially his left leg: it looks like it's sticking out of the body, and its upper part is too small. The upper part of Mario's right hand is also too small. His right hand doesn't look good, and his eyes look a bit lifeless. His pose is also kinda akward. Also, try to make your traces smoother, and paint with more regular lines.

On the upper side, his left hand is very nice (hands are hard to draw).

Lastly, I have a question: is he supposed to be jumping?

ChandlerThompson responds:

Thanks for the help on the symmetry and legs, I appreciate the compliment on the hands too. No, Mario just has his foot on a Goomba, somewhat looks like he's marking his territory, doesn't it?

[Horsenwelles]

-3 for being Merryo

and now for the visual stylings of it...

the anatomy is crooked (when taking it lightly)

the head is unappealing and it just feels like wasted space on the paper...

your line work is surprisingly smooth... where it wants to be....

the angle on mario's right hand in comparison to the left is just astonishing...

there really isnt too much to salvage other than you actually finished it.

2/5 visual appeal

and for practicality/use/story...

there is none.

its mario.

simple, in-out scenario

1/2

overall:

3/10 :(

ChandlerThompson responds:

Good review, I appreciate it dude

[WoodenSneakers]

:(((

I am now sad

ChandlerThompson responds:

This makes me happy :)