it's grrrrrrrrrrrrreat!!!!!!!1
this is one of the best animations I have ever seen! Keep up the good
work Hayk!
Reviews for "Sweet Mother of Vartan"
that was amazing
you do not talk about my mother haha nice!
great animation......
as already stated, your animation is great, but you're weakness is humor, as that's what you were going for. i gave a 5 just for the great animation and audio, but....the humor was definately lacking.
well .... not saying you should go the played out momma jumps in and clobbers the thug route, but......just making the fight longer after the momma insult...maybe have vartan go nuts and knock out the ref, then give the 2 ton terror a low blow (theres two opportunities for comedy) followed by an uppercut.
don't get me wrong, you got great style...i liked the slowdown for the hit
and great skill....i could never get myself to this level
you're only drawback is the comedy
on a side note..i checked out your site. it proves more than your animation does. amazing skill.......but, sorry i cant really put this as nicely as i'd like....lacking scripts. the level of animation in this flash got me to look and your site is a more extreme version of this flash. the demo reel was very impressive.
your only downfall is the script. now, if you collaborate (which happens often here) with someone who writes good comedy you both get a winner. or just put more effort into the script yourself.
if you need ideas just look at the all time list. super flash bros are always a hit for comedy or you could do a more serious skit with your skill and still rank high.
summing up....don't take this the wrong way, but concentrate on humor or seriousness or action in each flash. you have tons of potential. :)
FABULOUS!...but not really
Hey it was pretty good but that's about it. Nice animation though. I think if you focus a little more on humor and you'll do well in future animations.
Great job!
That was very well put together, you did an awesome job, the way you looped everything was spectacular! The music fit perfectly, blended very well together, it almost brought tears to my eyes with your perfection! The only thing is that the loading bar is very plain, try making that funnk and wild, sort of like a hook on an essay paper or something, get the viewer hooked before it even starts! Keep up the awesome work I will look forward to your next submissions!
-Jamie