Reviews for Broken Saints 6 Act 1

[f0d]

W O W

The drawings in this are amazing. The movie itself is way too slow though... too much reading. I nearly fell asleep watching this movie. I also wish it were heavier on the animation... as it is now it's just a lot of jaw-droppingly beautiful drawings, some amazing effectz, and some writing of a story I don't understand. Still amazing... if it were animated more... and had voice acting... it would've been a ten. You're storytelling is good I'd just like to see it in ess of a comic book format.

[Dream-of-Duke]

Good work,but...

The flash itself is very good. But I must say that it is a bit too hard for kids (teenagers) to understand the meaning of the drama. As you may be aware, most audience of NG are teenagers, and I somehow doubt that they are mature enough to understand the deeper meaning of your drama. I am a freshman at Duke University, and even I need to take some time to understand your drama. If you can put the themes in a way which most of us can understand, you will earn a much better score. Good luck next time!

[myTHself]

god will spit my soul from the highest tower

well it was a bit interesting and very carefully done... but i'm a giggler and found the seriousness a little over worthy... as it was a team effort i marked youses down a bit... i like the independent ones... maybe i'm jealous of your connectivity... i'm sure you'll vary the pace a little in your next installment but as the entity stands the pace was a little slow... i liked some of the words but maybe again there was a little too much power phrasing... maybe i just wanted more contrast and tonal range in the text... but then again you may have it to come... it was great work... and very competent, i think it'll make a good movie when compiled and re-edited. good start.

[AnalPenguinFarming]

THAT one creeped me out a bit

This one was well done, all the pieces of the story are coming together...And that tower that keeps popping out of nowhere...is really sweet but I want to know what it is so bad! Great work!

[bahaiWish]

What is the purpose of choosing Islam?

In my opinion, the BSaints team is trying to project a Western background, an American cosmopolitian angst upon Oran. This seems reasonable on the surface to those who have NO feel for Islam. But below the surface this projection is not believable by ...me. Yes, there are youth who question the traditions, but if you are going to dress his doubts, nightmares, visions up in Islam. The way you have done it is very very ...unbelievable.
Why? Because for one thing they don't have this Western Angst about dealing with the Devil.
"In the Name of God, gracious, and merciful.Praise be God, Gracious, Merciful. King of the Day of Judgement. It is thee whom we adore; it is from thee do we require help, Guide us in the right way, in the way of them that thou hast gratified; against whom thou hast not been displeased, and we shall not be misled." Ross translation of 1649. "This Surah constitutes the essence of the five daily prayers. When barely out of infancy a child born of Muslim parents is made to learn it by heart as a preparation for the worship which he or she will have to offer daily on reaching maturity..."Hashim Amir-Ali, "The Message of the Qur'an" Tuttle Pub. 1974,18. Decline from 7 to 5 because of this annoyance. Good luck.

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