hmmm...
Good concept. I'll give you that. It looked neat, and it was animated neat. The concept, like I said was good. Thought provoking. Intellegent. It had style, and creativeness points going for it.
The bad part? Judging by this movie, i don't really think you've gotten the hang of flash, yet. No preloader, and at the end it just fades out and the music keeps playing regardless. Like when you got to the end you just stopped and let the flash music keep playing. Putting the whole song in there also made the flash a bigger file than it should have been.
I'm not putting it down or anything, cause you have good visual flair, a good style, and i basically liked it. It's just the execution was sloppy and you need to kinda work on your flash making techniques and skill in future movies. Keep trying, though. Cause you obviously have the talent there to make good stuff.