8.5/10
Pretty damn good. You have a good sense of drama.
Graphics 8
I especially liked the electrical effects and the green letters. Very well done, to get a 10 I would suggest importing higher detailed backgrounds from photoshop. Otherwise, very well done.
Style 10
Pretty original, as said previously you have a very good sense of drama.
Sound 8
The music was fitting, to make it a 10 I would suggest having the music that played during the credits begin at the part where the guy got shocked. There actually was no sound at that point so the whole effect that the previous song was having had been shattered. The cold music from the credits beginning right there would have been perfect.
Overall 8.5/10
You can improve but it was still an above-average flash.