Interesting
This is a certainly a good litlle video. That's good for your first submission.
Interesting
This is a certainly a good litlle video. That's good for your first submission.
Pretty good...
...but try to use a different voice. Many people may think of the Clock Crew when they here that voice. But other than that no big mistakes that I can see.
Good start mate
Your idea was innovative and funny, nice one for thinking out a story before starting. The major bad point is definately the audio - I don't know why you decided to slow down your voice, I see where youre going with the deep powerful voiceover but I think the trick is too old to be effective :)
Some music wouldve been nice, but other than that, can't fault it
Keep going you show great promise.
not bad
Id just like to say well done mate for a first submision it was preety good alot betta than my first submision wich got fuked in seconds. i liked the idea and th graphics were gd well done
not bad
it was good. his voice got annoying after awhile, but it was still a good first animation.