Great start
A great start but you need to and a little something more then just some green and tan army men going at it on a table top. A little story (not too much is needed though, I mean who doesn't know green and tan army men hate each other) to explain why they're there, a different camera angle every now and then, and maybe a little more variation to the action over a bunch of army men going at it at very close range. Change some of these things and you could really have a good piece.