not a bad start...
I have a good feeling that ZTOL is going to be a common abbreviation in a year or so. Oh yeah, and if I can point out a few things for the future:
- That evil guy's dialogue seemed more gloaty than a prophecy. Kinda annoyed me (but that's just me).
- When those to guys were running, and the second stopped after he saw the first one die, it seemed unrealistic that he should stop if he knows what danger he's in.
-Voiceovers would be nice, you know, if you can get the right fits for everyone.
And by the way, good luck one the continuation on what I see to be a great series.
(By the way, do those stairs look like ladders to anyone else? Just throwing that out there.)