It's well done.
So, you wrote the speeches yourself? If you did, then that was good, because most idiots would use slang and shortened words, and if i'd have seen that, i'd have got rid of it straight away. Well done on no spelling mistakes either, if you wrote it, it shows that you actually care about your flash.
Also, not that its a bad thing, lol, I was surprised to see so much blood lol. People usually just leave that out. That was also good.
And, one last thing, this is so old and you have 811 reviews, do you still read them? If you do, I think you should write a reply.