Truthfully
it was good, but if you could you should of like used flash to draw stuff into it, like armor on the guys and stuff, that woudl be cool to see
Reviews for "AIM - Part 2"
Come on!!
WE have implants....
^^
AND AGAIN, IT'S AN INSANE IMPROVISATION!!!
dudes, don't you get the fun??? ^^
Grtz,
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Nice one.
This was nice, I liked the video, the fake gun, and the first person shooter view. Now for the points that could be improved :).
First. Turn of your sound, hold a piece of paper infront of the subtitles and watch the video again, It seems much more threathening and thrilling, witht that "man down" corpse lying in there. ^_^ It just doesn't seem right to have a person talking to himself the whole time through. Seems forced and actually a bit funny.
Second, Master chief...been playing to much halo? (2) :p
For the rest its very nice, good to see people trying out other media's instead of the usuall sprite/drawn things.
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well, it kinda sucked. good music, but not enough of realism. Hey, the guy are with RED dress and they are in a whatever infiltration mission! they shall wear black! at least! the gun is very cool, the movie has been well done, but no special effects. you can do this with flash, no?
eh....?
wow kid...
1) This movie might have been cool between you and your buds, but i seriously would not have submitted this garbage.
2) improvise is defined by websters as fabricating out of what is conveniently on hand. that looked scripted (and no a script does not just tell you what to say, and how i hope your dialogue wasn't scripted or i am seriously worried about you)
3) what is the purpose of this junk? is it just so you can walk around with a gun and squeak your pre-pubescent "Oh my god!"'s at ear drum shattering pitch?
not trying to be hard on you, but these were my initial impressions. My advice, is to work out a better story-line and come up with actual dialogue. if you're worried your dialogue will blow elephant cock, then forget the dialogue, take it from another approach. your camera work and sound was good for non-professional /non-trained people.
good-luck.