I really like the mood in this, but i like the mood in most of your pieces.
And i also like how you can convey shapes with very limited strokes.
Other people complain about not being able to see whats going on this is probably because of all the atmospheric lights and smoke you added on top of your value's.
Its not an overkill, though it could be better used.
I'd also recommend you look up some anatomy books.
Her proportions are wrong like her arms are too long and her head to big.
There are many more things wrong with her body, but you probably know this already.
Also could you tell me whats in the capsule behind her? Is she pregnant?