Halfway there...
You've got a song started, but I don't think it's finished yet...
I'd make the snares and drums less repetitive (yea, it gets kinda annoying) but you've got something going on with the strings... All you need is some variance. Some change in the song. You need to slow the song down at parts and speed it back up, or completely change the beat and then bring it all together.
So far, you've got the bare outlines of a song in infancy.
thanks for the honest feedback
Umm
well, I could tell you eveything that is pathetic about it but I realy don't have the time. OKOK, 2 things. Change the snare and base drum up a bit and level out the sounds so that the meledy can be heard.
What..?
It's.. Okay. It's not as good as it is said, I don't see the big deal. You have some loud beat with a quiet lead, and that's about it. It's repetitive and I don't like it very much. Maybe you could try again, I don't know, but I don't like it.
Sorry for ruining it for you.
Really good
This is actually very good, however I think that there should be some moments of intensity. Moments where the volume is raised causing a climax, then going back.
I could see this being used though, it has the action, stealth, power, and a good beat. Definitely could see this being used.
Uhm. No.
I hate the drum beat. I hate the hihats? I don't know what they're called.
I like the strings, though. They can stay.
Everything else can gtfo.
New beats pls.
adamyouhoebag.