"With a smile..."
Loved it! I thought it would be kinda' dull since it was a personal flash - they're usually too obscure or vague with too many private, "in-family" jokes to make much sense - but the humor in this was very easily accessible to just about anyone. The only familiarity you need is with the Matrix movies, at least a little, and it makes sense. Cute job, excellent use of the Matrix mythos & blending of key scenes from the two relevant movies. Keep 'em coming! :-)
i didn't like it.
and i don't see why my review was deleted for saying so.
Epic
he's like I'm gonna die and he opens his eyes and she's already done drawing blood =p
though I can understand the needle phobia
you did good ^_^
Aw....
That's really sweet that you made this for your mom. :D
And I can see it from the crybaby's point of view. I hate needles. D8
Last time I went to the ER, they took my blood. I cried like a baby the whole time.
Something called author comments.
"And she's a VAMPIRE by abbreviation and because she takes blood. Not because she's a literal vampire. Read the thing at the beginning."
Hopefully this lessens the amount of "OMG where are the vampires?"
It was a feel-good fun flash. Well done.