Pacing is way to slow even for a slow movie.
Sorry but this was almost PAINFUL to watch... it took your character almost 60 seconds to walk across a room and open a door... if this had been a bigger plot point or perhaps had some dialog it would have been much better... but I have to take into account that this was fairly original... but... would be nice to have things presented a little more clearly... I don't have to understand it but it helps to see it. Your timing needs some work... that's about all I have to say on that end... sorry. No offence ment I'm just trying to give my honest opinion.