not bad
You should really spell check your work. Also, the story seems really shallow. You didn't spend a lot of time explaining things like his past, or how he got to the monastery, or anything. Okay, just do the next episode with some actual depth and meaning and you might have something to go with that music.
Okay
It's not the greatest, but it's pretty good, some of the lines didn't seem right, and were a lil' fugged up. The graphics aren't that great, but like you said in you lil' comment area, it was to be expected. Looks like a good series, I hope it becomes something bigger and better.
WEll..
I have to say I didnt really like the way you drew out the characters. Well any way see you later.
I don't know...
I think that if you practice some more, this series would become a Newgrounds great. Get some better sound.