not bad
the one gaping error is that you need more screen time for the words. they fly by far too fast as it is.
Reviews for ""The Nelson Bird""
gclpunk responds:
yea im sorry thannks for writng the review
Not Bad
You've really gotta keep those words on the screen longer, I barley had time to read them!
gclpunk responds:
ill take that seriously now
?
I did expect more from you. I mean 5 days! I can pull out better movies out of my ass in 2 days.
gclpunk responds:
Well seeing is how I did not pull this out of "ass" as you put it. This cartoon had everything I wanted in it ok so I thought it was done ok....IM SORRY IF IT WASENT WHAT YOU WERE EXPECTING CHECK MY OTHER STUFF SAM FISHER CLoCK
that was kinda funny...in a chuckle chuckle way
the firts few Nelson animations went by way to fast...where the bird eats the bug, too fast couldn't really see what it was eating...add a few more frames here and there.
END.
gclpunk responds:
hmm yea my freind just said it by way too fast but hey thanks for the review
not bad
it was an OK flash, but the text went by too fast, if it went by a bit slower so that I didn't have to strain to read it, it would be much better. other than that, it was good.
gclpunk responds:
Yea that is a good idea that is a real problem with me i gotta fix it but thanks for the review