Shows good potential
My only thought is that you show a fear of using the space you have. Try to grow your subject to use the space on the format.
Maybe this is because you were new and it was a first try.
Fit the point of interest to the format.. yours is slightly lost in a sea of empty space...
Dang man. . .
This was preety crappy, do better next time man.
hmm, what is he writing?
basic combined with pascal? in word? why not c++ in notepad? would be even funnier if the error actually occured while compiling or linking the written application, not to mention more trustworthy.
well...
im sad to say i know what he is typing but hes putting it in the wrong place...heh... i used to make those shitty programs on my schools calculators
CIAHAD.
I feel offended by your flash. Can't you make anything decent? I suggest making flash that is NOT offensive. People will like you more... unless you dont want people to like you. Your descision.
Back on subject... the plot was science fiction, sound was crappy, too short, and the graphics were horrible. Better luck next time.