sweet
well it's better than what i could make even if i had a few days
:(
sweet
well it's better than what i could make even if i had a few days
:(
not bad
a bit short, but it was a neat little animation you made here, it was alright for a first submission too. if you work hard and learn more on flash, you have lots of potential.
haha
graphics/animating look quite good. the voice acting is really funny. hahah damn this would be a nerd's nightmare at a computer. A nerd just trying to be cool... "nobody wants to be a nerd" and nobody wants to be eatened by some random monster that came out from under the computer. This was a nice flash. nice work.
a slightly weird story but with a good moral
it's quite pointless really but overall quite silly. i like silly
Shows good potential
My only thought is that you show a fear of using the space you have. Try to grow your subject to use the space on the format.
Maybe this is because you were new and it was a first try.
Fit the point of interest to the format.. yours is slightly lost in a sea of empty space...