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Addicting...

I normally don't like pepole who put up stupid pointless frame by frames . This stupid pointless frame by frame however made me keep watching. No matter how much I wanted to clik that X on the top of the screen to stop watchign this thing, I couldn't. I wanted to see what was coming next. O and believe me I wanted to pus hthat X so damn bad. You sunm have a lot of patience to make this.

psychojester responds:

thats good ^_^

It shows you've put alot of time and effort in

but it did'nt really do much for me. if you'd planned it out and tried to tie in what was happening in the animation with what was being said in the song lyrics that would have been cool.

psychojester responds:

no. I dont want to do that, it was suppose to be just fun FBF.

Horrible.

I'm very sorry, but that was some horrible. 2000 frames used, and 2000 frames put to waste. Check out "A Simple Line 7" for some hints on whats good and whats not.

psychojester responds:

umm I have scene it. The problem is, that movie isnt 100% frame by frame, there is alot of other stuff too, just lots of fbf effects and etc.

This movie EVERY SINGLE FRAME WAS COMPLETELY REDRAWN. Unlike some of the movies on a simple line 7. And also did you not watch the frist one to 6th?

If you watched those you would see that they werent as good as the 7th and they gradually got better. THIS IS MY FIRST FRAME BY FRAME MOVIE. Give me a break. I am sure if I got the 2 - VII or something, that it would be great like that too.

ALSO, that movie as many authors, this movie is just one.

PLEASE DONT BE A JERK >B(

repetative

This flash isnt bad but it gets a little repetative and the images dont last long enough. It would be a lot better if you elongated the amount of time each frame got.

psychojester responds:

Ok first of all:
Flash by Huskerman2004:
- none -

Second of all, the only detail I find repetive is the fact its FBF and that it has the line movement between pictures and etc.

constructive criticisim

im not saying you didnt take a long time on it..work hard and I know its your first FBF and its really good for a first one and gives you a good base to improve on..but the point of submitting here is to accept what people say wether its good or bad..its to help you improve your animation skills its nothing personal so it would be better if you stopped being offended when people try to give you a constructive criticisim of your work and instead try to take something positive from it by improving your work.. I thought the flash was ok..it was a good idea and I'd agree with other who would say the drawing isnt spectacular...an animation half as long with twice the time put into the drawing in each frame would have been much more impressive I think.