Interesting
Hmmm well it was interesting dont get me wrong there, but i thought it could be greatly improved such as your character designs you should mold them so its more character like, and have much more scenes and stuff going on.
Character designs needed
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Wow
There isnt much to say in the way of positive aspects when it comes to this submission, i mean i guess your humour was good in parts but leaving it on the cliffhanger that you did it seemed to be a bit of a downer. I thought the character designs needed a lot of work and the lack of sound was a big problem, the text just wasnt very well displayed.
a peace of Shit
Ok i admit its better then what i could do (but not by much) i know its just a demo but it dident make sense untill i wacthed it a 100 times. The plot was hard to understand and THERE WAS NO SOUND and the GRAPHICS SUCKED AT LEAST YOU COULD HAVE SOME MUSIC THEN I WOUL OF GIVEN YOU a six overall. It sucked but wwith a weeks work it could be a greta flash movie it has potental but it sucks pretty much. Hopefully you will fix it up and have a greta movie someday.
lol.
Well this submission was a funny submission. It was funny in a way that you laugh at something for not being that great. The graphics were poor and looked like they were done by a 12 year old, if not younger and the story was especially odd. The transitions were poorly done and the ending sequence of a threat was also a bit out there. Not good.
What piece of garbage have unleashed on newgrounds
That was a piece of trash with no sound, bad plot, words went by too fuckin quikly and there was no fukin sound. Plus at the end you told us that you needed a rating of 3.35 too show us your sequel. That was a piece of garbage how is your ratings going to up, you should of made this one better, i know i am not watching the sequel that will probobly not even come out because this was a piece of garbage.