Well....disturbing...
yeah, that was thoroughly disgusting and disturbing, not exactly sure where one gets the idea for somethin like that...
Reviews for "Oliver Jones"
heh
heh not bad :)
funny
that was funny...especially the end
pretty funny
nice ending too.
try again
Your graphics were poorly done, the music is almost, but not quite, creepy and definitely not good. I kinda like the ending, but the plot in general is niether funny nor cool nor creapy nor anything. No one would like this unless they think urine is funny. However I think you definitely have potential for writing creepy stuff, just work on it and try watching some salad fingers, I don't like them much myself but lots of people do and you cold learn some lessons there.
PS: I recomend that you make a public profile, even I have one and I haven't made ANYTHING yet.