You need to improve
Sorry to give you a bad review but their many things you need to work on.
1.the anime was choppy
2.the story line was cruddy
3.they never dance together
4. plus imagine what their song would be if they got married probably the Backstreet Boys
This was crap.
Seriously, this was terrible. The alien looked nothing like any of the aliens. The predator was drawn *just* good enough to be able to tell what it was, but.. the colors were all wrong, so was the hair.
This was not funny.
J00 Phail.
looks like a one night stand to me, as you said...
But... I really did the way you drew the alien. The way you cartooned it out. That got the star I gave you.
your flaws:
here are your flaws: the predator was just shaking around istead of walking, the alien...was not an alien...he looked like a giant spiky thin thing, the aliens tounge/other mouth inside the first mouth was hanging out, it goes out and bites into people...not hang out like a tounge, the plazma caster makes noises when it fires...and the plasma caster FIRES WHEN IT FIRES!!! it does not just target and you die!!! you did not even think about that did you? are you a predator fan?....i bet not...and i'm barely an alien fan, but i know what they look like...those where just...crappy...don't do anything again...
I think you put more work into...
...the opening Newground/Credits part. The "alien" is anorexic, and did you get this idea from the Alien Loves Predetor comic?