Hmmm
Why did you use Smirf techno song at the beginning, it didn't really go with it, and the song made it all cheesy. and why did the bird catch on fire from the sun, it's not even that close to it, man you messed up in the head to even put this on here.
-KNOX- RULES
It was ok
It was funny, just not haha funny. And the alien looks kinda dog-ish and the predator looks kinda fruity.
((( DECENT )))
Well notbad, it could have been abit more funny, i did chuckle abit but could be improved in that area, the character was cool though, notbad work...
~X~
funny
what was with the smurf song in the beginning that justmade me laugh my ass off u got the predator skin collor of a little and the queen was thin but it was funny
wooooooooooot
i think its really cool!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! just because ist avp!!!!!!!!
:P just kidding it was kinda funny 2