You can do better
There was very little action, and the violence that did occur was slow and anti-climactic. While the animation wasn't too bad, it could use a little work.
Reviews for "Fight Club: John Raphel"
nbh responds:
theres more to the movie than violence
Heyy
I personally liked the music and it was an interesting stye you put together... a tad bit more action and i think it would've gone further
decent
i liked it. i was the deciding vote that had this pass judgement, but it was lacking something...i cant put my finger on it. mind you, it is a pretty good submission, but there is just something missing...
Why?
I liked the movie Fight Club, don;t get me wrong, but this was pointless to me. There was violence, but it was too drawn out, there wasn't enough action at all, and the music wasn't very good either. The only thing I liked about this was the animation, but there wasn't even a whoel lot of moving around, so even the animation wasn't appealing.
nbh responds:
fuck yourself mate, get a job or something
nice!
all i really liked was the amazing sound editing, the animation was good tho ^^
nbh responds:
cheers