Better than the vampire
YOu had a nice play button this time. You had a little bit of humor. I would have liekd to see more humor in it, this had the start of a story in it. Overall I think this is a nice work.
BTW I'm not donating due to the fact your email for pay pal is different from on the site. You post something on the site then maybe. I'll email the site for varification on none stolen