Nice thing
I gave 6 on this one just because of one thing. I really love those kind of movie, but they look all the same cause everybody tries to do them. Maybe if someone do it and puts mouths with lips sync on it... that i'll be great, wonderfull... i'm not talking of adding it with flash (the easy way) but i'm talking of adding it with a piece of paper stuck on the clay.
For your movie, i voted 4 cause it's good, but not great because of the story... Oh maybe because that those kind of things happens to me everyday...
So this is a Defi man... Try Pieces of paper mouth lips sync ;) And if you do it and have a good story, you'll have your 5