fool
yur portrayal of da Argus is an outrage.
fool
yur portrayal of da Argus is an outrage.
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make it longer.
Not bad for your first flash
This wasn't that bad for your first submission and the fat guy farting was funny...
but you seemed to put way to much effort into the beggining and not enough into the ending, my advice to you would be to develope the story a little more or include more than 1 or 2 jokes... But still good job and I look forward to seeing you improve by the next one...
Wowwww :D
For your first film...
it was amazing :D
You have the potential to be great at making more of these :D
I dont know who the other people who gave you 4 or below is thinking..
but that was great.. keep up the good work ^_^
more work
sure the"its cause im fat" joke was funny ,but cmon you could put a lot more into it. It had a lot of potential and you wasted it on one fat joke.